Well done.
Hm... I give an opinion about this entry in my blog.
I can see this in my mind. Nice one!
my first thought was 'please stop and say hello, and then join us for a coffee afterwards'.great image!
I've never tried haiku. I'm to verbose!
Nicely done!
"as silent as breath"Love that simile!Good haiku!
Very nice. In few words, you've written a story that many of us have lived. Very nice!
longing to be unfolded....wow....yeah, wow. powerful.
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Well done.
Hm... I give an opinion about this entry in my blog.
I can see this in my mind. Nice one!
my first thought was 'please stop and say hello, and then join us for a coffee afterwards'.
great image!
I've never tried haiku. I'm to verbose!
Nicely done!
"as silent as breath"
Love that simile!
Good haiku!
Very nice. In few words, you've written a story that many of us have lived. Very nice!
longing to be unfolded....wow....yeah, wow. powerful.
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